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To be honest,I am very honor that I could go to university,due to the fact that college life is of great benefit to my life. There are three reasons as follows. Firstly,university life teaches me how to manage my own time reasonably. It is known that there is a lot of free time in the college. Before I attended to college,my schedule was arranged by my parents or teachers. However,in college,no one tells me what to do and how to do. Therefore,I myself learned to arrange my lifetime. I also know I should take on responsibility for my own action no matter how good or bad it is. Secondly,university brings abundant knowledge to me. There is a magnificent library in my campus,which stores quantities of books. Honestly speaking,I feel greatly lucky that I could come to my college,because I can be exposed to thousands of books,to a most extent,which can broaden my horizons. Last but not least,it enhances my ability to make friends . Not only can I make friends with various classmates,who are from different places,but also I can touch different kinds of advanced teachers. Those people who give me a great due of assistance with my study and life.