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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8977
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分62.0分
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若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;文中词汇表达较为丰富,但高级词汇比较少,单词拼写要也加强;文章层次较为清晰。

用户练习作文:

A bad man may have a handsome face,and a kind man can own an ugly appearance.This is a simple truth.From that we can know: you can't judge a person by appearance. Here, I retell a famous history story:as we honw,in Shang Dynasty,there was very beautiful princeness called ShuDaji,her beauty can make each man hold his breath,but her action also can make each one stop breathing.One day,she pointed a Pregnant woman and asked the king to guess the baby to be born was boy or girl.Unexpectedly,After it,she asked some soldiers to Cutting open the belly of the womon to check their guessing... Reading here,do you think she is beautiful or not.I think most of will take her as a snake.Do you think a snake is beautiful? On the contrary,if you do people many good deeds,you'll be thought highly of even you a ugly one.

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