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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4498
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分85.5分
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作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

In recent years, there is an increasing number of people, especially youngsters, who use the internet in our common life. When it comes to the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication, the views vary from person to person. The internet plays a significant role in the communication with others who are in a distance. No one can deny the fact that we can’t emphasize the importance of the internet too much. Nonetheless, it appears that the internet is too convenient to a fault. Only the internet do a large quantity of people use to communicate with friends, classmates and families, no matter how near they are. Therefore, they don’t or can’t communicate with people when face-to-face. From what is mentioned above, we can safely draw the conclusion that the internet contributes to communicating conveniently, at the expense of interpersonal communication face-to-face. Hence, what we must do is to communicate more with families and friends in real life instead of on the internet.

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