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My views on Online Shopping It could be said that everyone is known online shipping.Nowaday.It is a fashion way for people. As online shopping is convenient and time-saving.More and more people are likely to buy things online.You don't need to go away and spent much time on the street.Just seatting in the front of the computer. Just in this way. You can get everything done. One of an advantage of online shopping is that the goods are more cheper than real store.In this way.People also can save money. I think no one would like to spent more money for the same product. But just everything has its two sides,online shopping is not exceptive.it is hard to know the quality of the product only by seeing pictures. As far as I am concerned.Though online shopping is quite popular among people. we can try to do it.but remenber,not very often.