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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9558
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
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1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分49.0分
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作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇,但请认真检查词汇的拼写;简单句偏多了;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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My views on Online Shopping It could be said that everyone is known online shipping.Nowaday.It is a fashion way for people. As online shopping is convenient and time-saving.More and more people are likely to buy things online.You don't need to go away and spent much time on the street.Just seatting in the front of the computer. Just in this way. You can get everything done. One of an advantage of online shopping is that the goods are more cheper than real store.In this way.People also can save money. I think no one would like to spent more money for the same product. But just everything has its two sides,online shopping is not exceptive.it is hard to know the quality of the product only by seeing pictures. As far as I am concerned.Though online shopping is quite popular among people. we can try to do it.but remenber,not very often.

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