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邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:27浏览次数:6621
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2010年以来,我国相继发生了几起校园暴力事件,使国人为之震惊,震惊之余,大家都陷入了沉思:我们该如何加强校园安全呢?请你以How to improve school safety为题,写一篇120词左右的短文。
参考词汇:校园campus 保安security guard
用户的作文(系统评分88.5分
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作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用高级词汇;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

read and practice As a student, I should learn first. Learning primarily through the acquisition of knowledge representation, we gain knowledge of a variety of ways, one of important ways is to read. Reading broadens person's horizons, understand current affairs news happening in the world. Reading can also cultivate character, a beautiful sentence can make people feel relaxed and unwind. Reading also allows us to learn advanced skills and knowledge in various fields, reading will also enable us to recognize previous mistakes, reminding us not to make similar mistakes. However, practice is an important method to obtain knowledge. If you want to make new advances, it must be put into action. Innovation alone reading is not enough to practice we can skills and insights gained through the study to practical experience, making an already meaningful experience more meaningful. Practice is the sole criterion for testing truth. Innovation is not enough to rely on the reading practice we can not only get knowledge from books, we need to be verified by the practice of knowledge and the most memorable new knowledge Practice is not just to do things, and practice is the combination of knowledge and reality. The practice can not only test knowledge, but also cultivate our ability, to adapt to changing circumstances. In fact, practice and reading are as important as for us. Because of time and space, among other factors, we can not always have to practice, books are our main way to get knowledge. But books are a summary of our ancestral wisdom, not our own summary, you want to grow their own, we have a reasonable grasp of their relationship, so we gain knowledge by reading, with the knowledge to guide practice. But you can not copy all the books we need to practice to check the knowledge to learn more, to mai a balance between the two.

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