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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8977
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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文章衔接手法恰当;单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。

用户练习作文:

Don't Judge From Appearance There is a proverb that: don't judge a book by its cover. Unfortunately, people always like to assess a person based on appearance. It is not the fault of people, but we need to change this view. Personal beauty is a greater recommendation than any better of reference. Sometimes it is right, but it is not absolutely correct. What a pity! Some people think it as truth so they spend a lot of time learning makeup, buying clothes, and even get plastic surgery. In a certain sense, good look is a pass, can make people go to heaven, can also make people go to hell. In the "Notre Dame de Paris", Esmeralda fell in love with Phoebus, caused the tragedy for Esmeralda. Quasimodo is very ugly, but he always by her side, protects her, and eventually died with her. The rose is beautiful, but we think that it is more beautiful is that it contains the fragrance. The external beauty is temporary, however, inner beauty is eternal.

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