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The communication between people is become more convenience than ten years ago , because people can communicate with their families , friends on the Tnternet. It seems that they are living a easier life than before. However, the fact is that the internet also brings them some negative aspects. For one thing, with the chat softwares appearing, such as, QQ, Wechat and so on. People can not help spending more time in those softwares to kill time. What's more, many of them are addicted to chating randomly, even with the strongers, which caused that they have less time to do other meaningful things, such as reading. For another, if people are much depended on the internet to communication, they will lack the communication of face-to-face. As we all know, the best way to develop a relationship is often have date with each other. In conclusion, everthing is double-edged sword. People should see the thing from different side and try to not affected by the negative side. In my part, people should not decrese the depend of communication on the internet.
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