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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦166:打篮球

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:08浏览次数:1490
要求:

假如你叫李华,你的美国网友Peter打篮球时意外受伤,请你用英文给他发一封电子邮件。主要内容包括:

1. 询问病情;

2. 介绍一下你近期学校活动及学习情况;

3. 表达祝愿。

注意:
1. 字数控制在80-100词左右;
2. 不能出现真实的校名和姓名;
3. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。


Dear Peter,
How’s it going? I’m sorry to hear that. _____________________________________________________
 Yours,
 Li Hua
用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
评语:

作者词汇量积累不错,高级词汇积累较少;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

用户练习作文:

Dear Peter, How’s it going? I’m sorry to hear that you got injured while playing basketball. You should have a good rest at home. And you’d better care for yourself when you do sports. Everything goes well here! I enjoy great changes in my school. On the one hand, the teachers make their teaching styles colorful. In my science class, my teacher always encourages us to think,and cultivates our ability to study independently. On the other hand, we have plenty of time to try what we want to do. We had our School Day last week. There arc different kinds of activities, such as speech contest, talent show, volunteering.... I took part in the English speech contest, and I won the first prize. I will send you some photos about my School Day if you like. Hope you’ll get better, and be back to your school as soon as possible. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua

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