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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40869
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉。

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A considerable number of people who think that the dream is a forecasting from the god, claim that we should believe these image what happed in our dreams will come true someday. I partly agree with this viewpoint, as for me, the story in the dream is only a review of our past experience, which leave a great impression on us in the daytime, especially considering the formation reason of the dream. The dream is the meaningless reflection of our subconscious, which the content of depends on what we see and hear. Anyone would agree that the accomplishment of humanbeings comes from the joint effort of the whole world. As we all can see, the personages, who achieved the success in their adept field, are always the most assiduous people in work. For instance, over one hundred studies carried out in the USA revealed that these hardworking students can achieve high employment rate (79.65%). To the contrary, these who have blind faith in the predictions of the dream such as the number of lottery, the coming cataclysm or the increasing prize of stock have few job and promotion opportunity, and it turns out that they take jobs below what they dreamed. From what has been mentioned above comes his natural summary that we should not confused by the scenes in our dream, which is just a distorting mirror of real life.

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