雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

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the pie chart illustrates teenagers' preferences on fast food, especially on hamburgers, pizza, french fries, fried chicken, tacos and sushi in America. According to the chart, it is hamburgers that stand in an obvious status as the only one with the ratio of one third. Followed by pizza and french fries, the proportion is 26% and 22% respectively. What also deserves attentions is that the total percentage of the last three preference fast food still can not surpass what hamburgers occupies, which again emphasize the popularity of hamburgers in America among teenagers. While among the last three, it is sushi that takes the least proportion, say 3%, followed by tacos which holds 7%. Fried chicken possesses 9% of the ratio, ranking as the fourth favourite in fast food. In all, hamburgers, as the most popular fast food, grasp more than 10 times preference than sushi.