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Wonderland I had a dream of Alice yesterday. Alice was a pretty girl with big, dark eyes. She took me to the Wonderland. There were many kinds of flowers such as roses and sunflowers.I am surprised that these flowers can talk! It is interesting! Except that,many small animals were flying in the sky at that time. I wanted to fly in the sky,too. So I tried my best to fly,but I was fault. Alice saw that. She gave me a silk coat that could make human flew like animals. I put it on and then I could fly. I was very excited! Suddenly,I fell down. "I need help!"I shouted. I woke up in the end,and it was a dream.
