2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；文中衔接词丰富；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

October 28 Yufei, I wonder if I could borrow your electronic dictionary which was purchased last year by your parents for a couple of days in that now I am translating some significant articles.There are so many new words that I have to look them up frequently.I only have a traditional paper dictionary but,of course,it is not so convenient as an electronic one and therefore dramatically decreases my speed of translating.So I think your electronic dictionary is more appropriate for me.I promise that I will be very careful with your electronic dictionary and prevent any damage to it. Thank you very much. Zhang Wei