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How to make a good friend With the age of information coming, we can communicate with different persons and make friends in a new way. However we are facing the problem that how can we make a good friend. Although friend is playing an important part in our life, we don't know how to make friends. Besides, true friends are always few in life and they will like each other, enjoy being together and sharing their interests. What's more, it is more difficult to make friends in different age and background or build friendship in argument and discussion. Otherwise, friends would stand annoying habits and accept different opinions. For my part, as a student a good friend means that a good teacher, a good helper, a good partner and a person who we can talk about everything. For me, a good friend is like a good teacher, because he can teach me something about study or life. In addition, a good friend is a good helper not because them can help us, but because them can company with me even if at the hard time of our life. A good partner means that we have something in common and whatever we are arguing with each other or we are abused each other, we can restore the relation again. Concerning the last one a good friend is who we can talk about everything, there is no doubt that a good friend should be a good listener and can keep secret. All in all, a friend in in need is a friend indeed.
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