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My hometown is changing With the rapid development of economy,in recent years,our hometown has been changing.In this winter vacation I have found many differences of our hometown.Such as it is an obvious thing that more new road has been built,more new car is driven on the road and more decoration has been used in our street. As the government called " if you want to be rich, you must build the road first."Our hometown had built many new roads.In some ways,it influenced the lives of local people.For example,it can change the travel mode which people go out in ancient times. While new roads had been built,more and more car faded in our sight.On the one hand, it has brought some convenience,on the other hand it also caused some seriously problems.Such as waste gas,traffic jam and traffic accident.Therefore I think it is an ordinary phenomenon that every family have a car,but we still should pay attention to the driving safety. With the development of our life quality,people begin to enjoy the spirit of happiness.For example,in this year our hometown had been decorated our street with neon light.It's a big change of our hometown and this phenomenon also shown us that our hometown has developed very well. All in all,the changes of our hometown has brought us many conveniences and enjoys.And hoping the development of my hometown will be more and more perfect.
