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2002年专业四级英语作文真题:保持健康

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:17浏览次数:1974
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题目 The Best Way to Stay Healthy
说明 Nowadays people are becoming increasingly aware of the importance of health.  And they have different ways to stay healthy. For example, some exercise every day; others try to keep a balanced diet.  What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

As is clearly shown by the material, obviously there is a great rise in caring about eating habit. First of all, it is necessary for us to know four main groups of food, because only if we eat such healthy food that we can keep health and be given enough energy. Besides, caring more about our eating habit, which will also be good to our health. As far as I am concerned, it is not an uncommon occurrence that many students are in bad health, there is one reason for this phenomenon is that they do not have a good eating habit, such as didn't eat breakfast, eating food in a hurry, eating as much food as he can and so on, which is harmful to our health. To the phenomenon, I have the following suggestions. To begin with, we should pay more attention to the food which we eat. Only if you eat the right food that you can keep working actively and be given enough energy. Besides, you should eat food more regularly, which will help you maintain body function more efficiently. What is more, do not eat too much or too little, it is important for building up a good eating habit. In sum up, disease finds its way in by the mouth. Hence, it is essential for us to have a good eating habit

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