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We all live in this world, and we may feel lucky that we can listen to, see, talk or even to walk. However, there are still some persons who were unlucky and they were called disabled people. Nowadays, there is no denying the fact that what we can do to help disabled people has been raising more and more concern from the public. Personally, I have the following two suggestions to you. First of all, to respect them. Although disabled people were unfortunate to miss their body function, we are the same in spiritual, such as the famous philosopher and economist Stephen Willian Hawking. For the disabled people, it's quite difficult to accept that they were different from others and to be treated as a monster. Therefore, it is a virtual to respect them and to be sympathy for others. Then, to treat them as if we were in the equal position. As the disabled people who can not live as easy as normal person is sensitive to be treated as a strange person or to be took special care of as if he was fragile. Thus, it is better to treat the disabled people in a way which is to be treated as usual as a normal person. All in all, like he rose, the more kind to others and the happier you will get.
