小学三年级英语作文:My father's day

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Hello! I am Jane. Come and see my father's day. In the morning, he usually gets up early. Then he cooks breakfast. Because he wanted my mother to sleep a little longer. After that, he often goes to work by car. He is always very busy. When he doesn't go home for lunch, my mother was worried. But he never comes home late. Sometimes he watches TV in the evening. This is my father's day. What about your father? Can you tell me?