Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;熟练使用了一些长难句;请注意分段。
Judging from the table, we can see that people's income increases along with their education levels. Above all,the average college graduates earn much more than the typical high-school graduates. In conclusion, what accounts for education pays is not the degree alone,high education brings to graduates is the ability to learn quickly and efficiently. People received more education tend to keep lifelong learning habits after their graduation, which would help them gain but the graduate's ability and learning habit.