可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
Many of the grand challenges of today and the future are found in question: How we are going to treat the phenomenon that artificial intelligence brings serious improvements in modern life. In my perspective, artificial intelligence is to benefit mankind in disease control, environmental pollution control and so on, but not to make a sense of a dynamic, confusing world. To begin with, there will have been found the way of treating AIDs, but doctors will face the challenges to treat the AIDs patients. The necessity to reduce the risk of transmission to doctors needs to be thinking. The artificial intelligence may take place in doctors to treat AIDs patients. What's more, artificial intelligence has its profound significance for environmental pollution control. Modernization has brought numerous cars, which brings a ponderous burden on the environment and facilitated the environmental deterioration. We need to apply the artificial intelligence to invent a system that can reduce the emission of carbon dioxide. Artificial intelligence deserves to develop in a right way. It can benefit mankind in more and more fields.