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To tell the truth,I have not really thought about my future life. No definite aim,and no special expect. But I am already 21 years old now. Compared with the peers,I am just an ordinary girl. Thus,I recently make up my mind to change. I don't want to live a boring life,and I want to make my life more colourful. At least,I won't regret my young life,instead,be proud of my choice. First,I will keep exercising every day. Due to the fact that health is our wealth.As a college student,I have a lot of free time. I decide to run on the playground every night. To be honest,it will be a little difficult to me,because I haven't run for a long time. However,as the saying goes,everything is difficult to begin. On if I can persist,I believe not only I can build my body,but also I can enhance my willpower. So I absolutely believe that exercise will be of great benefit for me! Second,I am going to participate in some social and volunteer activities.Because of my lousy inarticulateness, I am always afraid of communicating with other people. In other words, I don't konw how to talk with other friends. Sometims I am usually used to be silent.Perhaps,that makes me feel more easy.And, I know,in the future,my job will be a teacher,which needs me to talk to my students,my colleagues,and my boss. I am indeed supposed to change the deathful weakness,which will lead to lose my job in the future.That is the reason why I encourage myself to take part in more activities. Third,I also want to nuture some other interests.There will be an intensive stress in the future occupations.Consequently,I want to add my capabilities to find a job in the future. I plan to learn the piano in my free time.Besides,I will also draw some pictures. In order to live a different life,I should and I must carry out my plans. Only then will I have a bright life!
