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Dear Sigmund My name is Li Hong . I’m a student in Grade nine in No.2 Middle School. My English name is Gemini. Blue and yellow are my favorite colour. Now I have a big problem. My parents are very strict with me so that I have only little time to play.But love cosplay very much .So I spend lots of time on it after school .Sometime I don”t hand in my homeworke on time .Now my stuy is getting worse and weorse .My parents and teachers want me to give up my only hobby . I don't know how to deal with it .Can you give me some advice? I hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes for you! Yours, Li Hong.