2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

October 28 Yufei, I wonder if I could borrow your electronic dictionary which was purchased last year by your parents for a couple of days in that now I am translating some significant articles that includes a great many of academic vocabularies.Therefore,there are so many new words that I have to look them up frequently.I only have a traditional paper dictionary but,of course,it is not so convenient as an electronic one and therefore dramatically decreases my speed of translating.So I think your electronic dictionary is more appropriate for me.I promise that I will be very careful with your electronic dictionary and prevent any damage to it. Thank you very much. Zhang Wei