Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达较恰当,学术词汇表达灵活;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词。
Judging from the table, we can see that people's income increases along with their education levels. The fact revealed by these data is obvious: a degree does bring distinctive financial benefits to its holders. But is it true that a degree alone can ensure a bright future? I don't think so because, on the one hand, People eived more education tend to keep lifelong learning habits after their graduation, which would help them gain more opportunities in their career path. In conclusion, what accounts for education pays is not the degree alone, but the graduate's ability and learning habit.