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Wonderland I had a dream of Alice yesterday.I met a girl in my home. Her name was Alice. Alice was a pretty girl with big, dark eyes. She took me to the Wonderland. There were many kinds of flowers such as roses and sunflowers. I am surprised that these flowers can talk! It is INTERESTING! Except that, many small animals were flying in the sky at that time. I wanted to fly in the sky, too. So I tried my best to fly, but I didn't succeed. Alice saw that. She gave me a silk coat that could make human flew like animals. I put it on and then I could fly. I was very excited! Suddenly, I fell down. " I need help! " I shouted. I woke up in the end, and it was a dream.
