文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
To tell the truth, everyone may meet various difficulties in our daily life. There is no wander that we sometimes need other people's help. Likewise,the disabled people need assistance. There are three reasons as follows. Firstly, respecting is important to disable people. We should have an equal attitude to get along with them. I think everyone wants to be respected by others not only in behavior but also in mind. Moreover, understanding plays an essential role when we intend to help disable people. After getting well known one another, we can take specific actions to help, instead of blind help. Last but not least, we should show our considerations to them. To some degree, disabled people may be sensitive to the society and environment. They need our considerate help. In the bottom of my heart, helping others is a chinese virtue. We are obliged to help peopple who need help. Only in this way will our society be more harmonious and beautiful.