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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；全文结构较为严谨。
The Value of University Life A number of things happened in my first year at college,including good things,meaningful things,and unhappy things. From where I stand,all of them is rewarding,because they make me grow up. First of all,I think the most significant reward is that I get a lot of resources. I can go to the library when I want to read some books. I can go to the chongqing university when I want to sink myself into the strong learning atmosphere. I can go to some professors' class when I want to learn. Of course,I also made many friends with others. And then,I got a lot of time which can arrange by myself. In the past year,I spent much time in shopping,playing,loving,also have had a part-time job,but seldom take the time to study. I won a hard-won opportunity. After that I to know the vital of responsibility. The last thing is that I have learned what is independence. In my first semester at college,I had some problems with my own issues and always call my father to ask for his advice. But he just told me that it's up to you. At that time,I have the wrong thought that my father did not love me. Gradually,I realized that I became independent all thanks to my father.
