2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者能较多样地使用词汇，学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

With the development of internet and computers widely using,computer have become a good friend of human.Firstly,computer can help us to finish dealing with much affairs.we can use it for working , shopping ,making friends,asking doctor and so on.secondly,It promotes working effective by using working welfare. Every coin has two sides.Although we can benefits much ,computer also have a bad influence to us.on the one hand ,many teenergers addicte to computer games instead of concentrating on studying. On the another hand , amount of people stay at computer so long that their eyesight is bad . in a word,computer is our friend,we could take advantage of its technology to help our job and life,but we should control our time staying in front of computer.