拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
As a famous saying goes”A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention.” We live in the information explosion era of massive amounts of data generated era. From wide variety of types of data, the ability to quickly obtain valuable information, which has brought us so much convenience that people can click the computer to require what they need. Rapidly, the information explosion era comes with some downsides. For one part, people are unable to deal with the problem by themselves, inundated by more information that people can possibly hold in our hands, they are increasingly hand off the job of remembering to search engines and smart phones. They rarely think twice when they confront a problem that is difficult to solve it. What’s more, surrounded by much irrelevant information, people are easy to go into the trap of network fraud. With all kinds of information, people cannot draw a clear distinction between the useful and spurious information. In a short, people would be more and more lack of critical and independent thinking if they lost their way in the information explosion era. Then what can we do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information? The most important thing is that thinking twice when we search the internet, learning to think by ourselves when we get into trouble.
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