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作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
Every time we turn on the TV, we will see differently various advertisements. Some people enjoy it because they can find something that they need in an easier way, while others are being annoyed with it. In the point of my view, I think that advertising on TV is a convenient way for people to find and get the stuff which they need. And it helps them save a great deal of time and get to know more details information of the product, people can compare it with the one in the real store. What's more, the vivid plot and wonderful music give a deep impression on customers. But in fact, there exist some disadvantages of advertising on TV, people only can know the information that advertising on TV which can not be recognized true or false, so people should be careful when they buy something that recommending on the TV. In a word, no matter what you buy and wherever you buy from, you should be cautious and careful.
