拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。
Nowadays,the desire for good health is universal. Wherever you are and whatever you do, staying healthy is always important. With the improvement of our living standards, people are attaching more and more importance to their health. However, which do you think is the best way to keep healthy? Different people come up with different views: eating green food, doing outdoor exercises or going to hospital for medical treatment frequently. As far as I am concerned, the best way to keep healthy is to develop a good quality of psychology. According to some surveys, nowadays, most patients are not physically sick but