2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。

The fact that AlphaGo won the match to Lee Sedol shook the people all over world. We have to pay more attention to the AI. Indeed, with the development of technology, many aspects in our life will rely on the AI in the future. Firstly, for entertainment, people would rather use cellphones to entertainment. They play games or watch TV series on cellphones instead of watching on TV. What's more, more and more people have the computer, which appeals lots of people, such as adults, adolescent, even children, which is likely causing the decreasing of communication between parents and children. Secondly, for communication, people chose more convenient way to keep in touch with their families and friends, such as the APPs: QQ, Wechat and so on. There is a tendency that more and more APPs of social communication appear. That means that people will spend more time on the Internet than real life. Exposed in more virtual world, people will lack the sense of reality. AI is not only bringing us convenience but also weakness. We should make use of AI.