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My Weekends At my weekends,I always do many things to spend my spear time. First,I always have a good sleep,because at weekdays,I always grt up early to go to classroom to study,I feel very tired,so at weekends'morning I always sleep over to relax myself and make me full of energy. Then about 9:00,I always get up to do some homework,because I think at morning I always have energy to do something better. Then I often go out to eat with my roommate,at lunch time,we always feel relaxing and do not in a hurry. In the afternoon,I will go out with my roommate to play,not in the school or room,because we want to have another feeling of weekdays. Finally in the evening,I alwys hace a video call with my parents,that's very good,I feel very happy. Then I always do some homework and then play computer. Then,my weekends are over.