作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
Sunday Yesterday was Sunday,I was in my dormitory as usual. Yesterday was the worse day these days,because it was wind all day. When I washed my clothes,they were all blown by the wind. Then when I go out to eat with my roommates,the winds were too strong to walking normally,ride bicycle was more difficult. Yesterday afternoon I read news about it was snowed in some cities in the south. Then I remembered that when I called my mother yesterday morning,she told me that my hometown was snowing. I missed my hometown so much when I heard my mother's words. My home is Gansu where snows every year. Every time snows,the tree were covered by the snow the same as the ground. I always play with snow with my friends. That must be the most interesting ting when I was young. This Sunday must be the most lonely sunday when I went to school. I missed my family and my hometown so much.
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