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The Value of University Life In our high school,our teachers had told us that the college life was very comfortable and it must be the most precious memories. However,when we get into college,many of us would say college life has no difference between high school life. Neverless in my opinion,there is no doubt that college life is my treasure. First of all,when we get into college,we don't have much homework as high school so that we could have more time to enjoy our own time and do many things we like. Second,college is a stage to exercise ourselves. There are many opportunities for us to show ourselves and dig out our advantages and make them more perfect. Third,in the college,we can make friends which can always be with us even all of our life. Of course,there is more value which needs ourselves to dig them out. But on the other hand,if you waste your life in college,then you won't realize the value of college. You will just feel the college life is borning and there is nothing except eating,playing and sleeping. As a result,the value of college is control by yourself. You should have a good plan of your college life and find the value of it. Many adults always say that college is a small society. There are many different kinds of people in college just like the society and we can get a good exercise of ourselves at college. In a word,college is the treasure of our life.
