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2005年专业四级英语作文真题:我对艺术节的看法

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:25浏览次数:3252
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题目 My idea of a university arts festival
说明 The students' Union of your university is planning to hold an arts festival next semester, and they are inviting students to contribute their ideas and suggestions as to how it should be organized or what should be included.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了。

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What We Can Do to Help Disabled People Although the medicine in today's society has developer a lot,there are still many people developing a lifelong disease which. Although the things we can do for the disabled are fiddling,we should try our best to help them. First of all, the most important thing we should do is treated as normal person. Maybe some people would think the disabled can do nothing by themselves and always look at them with a sympathetic eye. Let's think about it if you are disabled people,would you like to be treated as a member of the special group? So we should see them as ordinary people. Second,we should take action to help them instead of just says we will help them. You can start helping them from the little things. For instance,you can accompany the blind for a walk and clean the room for some people who have difficult in walking. On the whole,in my opinion the most important thing that we can do for the disabled people is to treat them as ordinary people. Every person doesn't like to be treated as a special group.

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