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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22889
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。

用户练习作文:

Great changes have taken placed in my hometown. In the past, my home town was surrounded by green trees and we can see fishes swimming joyfully around in the clear rivers. At that time, the houses were simple , streets were narrow and people were living in a poor life. But now, tall buildings, fabulous stores and plants are everywhere, and the streets are full of rushing cars which in various sizes; while the payments of the development of the industry are as below: the environment goes form bad to worst; the number of the trees decreasing from year to year and fishes have disappeared from the rivers. Thus, taking sound actions to fight against the pollution is an urgency!

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