作者词汇基本功不错,建议今后多用高级词汇;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
like friends.As Queequeg said in Moby Dick,the christian also need cannibal’s salvation.And Robet T.Tally[[6] ][6]try to find the first narrator and observer Ismael.The meaning of the sentence“Call me Ismael.”maybe have double meaning inside,its invisible means author himself. StevenB.Herrmann[[7] ][7]agreed with RoberT,because Melville’s personal experience similar to Ismael in Moby Dick,he have a friendship with Tayo,they seem live same-love just as Ismael and Queequeg. For another main character Ahab,Susan McWilliams[[8] ][8]Thought Ahab are beyond the pale of common humanity, Melville offers much reason in Moby Dick to regard Ahab as a reflection of ordinary American political life. Two of Ahab's most definitive characteristics is his isolation and his desire for domination.The reason the crew members are so quick to adopt Ahab's way of thinking. in large measure Ahab as a representative American man makes it possible to better understand Melville's true anxieties about the prospects for democratic.In Denis Donoghue[[1] ][1],introspection of the government,the war happened between American and Iraqis,the definition of just should be doubt,through reading Moby Dick,Denis found captain Ahab as a dominator ,strong and blindly.This is the shortage of American spirit. flourishing in the United States. 2.2Study in China 2.2.1The background According to Dali Zhanand Fengli Duan,they found Melville was born in a Calvinist family. The poor life caused Melville him to form the humanitarianism. Abundant experience especially his sailing experience influenced his writings. In the first part of the 19Th century was an era of radical individualism. People believed that man can conquer the nature.The atmosphere was full of optimism and expansion.But Fengli Duanand Wenxia Ma input that Melville’s friend Hawthorne had some influence for him in the tragic theme. That is the historical background of the Moby Dick. From the background of Moby Dick,Fengli Duan and Wenxia Ma explored it deeply,in they point of view,The main character Ismael’s prototype connect strongly to the Melville himself.So Ismael reflects the prototype in GENESIS of bible and the real life of its author.Especially the philosophical temperature of Melville himself,to near the water recognized as a kind of nature for philosopher as the author said.But