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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10562
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题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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作者词汇基本功不错,建议今后多用高级词汇;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文章层次较为清晰。

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It should also be noticed that, though Moby Dick is in many ways “the best sea story ever written,”so Cooper’s two sea romances, The Pilot and The Red Rover ; Etchings of a Whaling Cruise by John Ross Brown in 1846.those writings were influenced Melville.Melville gathered the image make it into Moby Dick. Refer to other literary,the one closest to Moby Dick,it must be the Bible.The bible has widly influenced of the world,especislly historical influence.It rooted western civilization,and made the western civilization today.Through the history,the most extensively western ideas and culture come from it.Just as bible is some kind of an encyclopedia,Moby Dick is a guide of whales hunting.In the deep mind of great minds,bible influenced human race. Northrop Frye’s The Great Code is a famous critical work that studies the Bible from the point of view of a literary critic. He examines the Bible through myth and symbol, finding patterns in and correspondences between the Old and the New Testaments. He thoroughly discusses the biblical images and narrative patterns which he calls “archetype” and shows clearly how they form an imaginative . 2.2.2Biblical archetypes Melville expressed two kinds of thoughts:Christianity and American spirit. For Christianity, Melville believes that the eternity only belong to God. Moby Dick has massively used Bible prototype, and has utilized the Christianity literature most universal creation technique symbol. For American spirit, the novel displays Melville’s imperialist vision and his individualism spirit because the whaling industry provides the massive wealth for the society and propagates American democracy and civilization. Melville has contradictory thoughts ,one for the differences between the Christian beliefs and social reality. The fraternity collapses at the first blow in front of the realistic benefit. Next, the two sides in“Ahab and Moby Dick”.Ahab is the hero of pursuing man’s dignity. Meanwhile, he is the monster of revolting against God. He is humane but cruel, noble but ruthless. And for Moby Dick ,it represents God’s authority, on the other hand, it is the ancient wicked dragon. According to Dexing Han[[11] ][11],Yang Liu and Fengli Duan [[10] ][10],They explored three kind of characters in Moby Dick,That is, the the main , supported and stealth prototypes characters in the bible.For the main characters are Ahab and Ismael;the

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