单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
I have a new teacher. He just came to our school.He teaches our math.He is tall. He have black hair, big eyes.He is nice. He like to smile with us. When I have some problem, I go to ask him. He always teaches me carefully. Sometimes He courage me to think it by myself. With his help, This course my math get big progress.