2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

文章学术词汇使用熟练，词汇表达较为丰富；采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

October 28 Yufei, I wonder if I could borrow your electronic dictionary which was purchased last year by your parents for a couple of days in that now I am translating some significant articles that includes a great many of academic vocabularies.Therefore,there are so many new words that I have to look them up frequently however,I only have a traditional paper dictionary that I can merely search it page by page.Correspondingly,it is not so convenient as an electronic one and therefore dramatically decreases my speed of translating.Consequently, I think your electronic dictionary is more appropriate for me.I promise that I will be very careful with your electronic dictionary and prevent any damage to it. Thank you very much. Zhang Wei