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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10554
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题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;若注意部分错误,文章会更漂亮;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

dialects in public place are acceptable as long as it is served for a proper popurse. in fact, every tool has its positive influence, and dialects are no exception,even when it is used in public places. when will dialects be needed in public places? imageing there are older people in subway staiton or a shopping mall who do not find their way or how to use modern machine set up in such public places. you have to speak in dialects to help them for thoes old people have no idea of what you are saying when you speak mandarin. in a big modern city, dialects are often be neglected by younger people. if you repeat the massage in dialect after mandarin or english version, it will remind younger people of their own language and culture. in the meanwhile, it will show its culture appeal to foreign friends. in small city or town where most people are local who are used to their dialect, dialect will be more convinent and make people feel more closely to their own culture. the question "are dialects just as acceptable in public places" raised is because mandarin is usually used in public places and it seems rude and low quality to use dialect in public. but that's not the truth. dialect is part of our culture and do a lot of help in our history. what we should do is to use dialect properly in public places.

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