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Nowadays Shanghai already become econimc centre and more and more modern. Therefore, if my foreign friend come to visit my hometown, I'll take him/her to many interesting place and take him/her to eat our local food. First of all, I think Yu-Gadern is one of the famous traidion place in Shanghai. It symbols our history. I guess my foreign friends will like its culture, it's very special. And the another reason I'll take them to here is the snake! Dumpling is one of the food symbols our hometown. I'll bring them to eat our local snake. They haven't eat in other place. The most important is the dumpling is much delicious. I think they'll never forget the taste. Secondly, the night view of Yu-garden is amazing for them It has a lot of our own culture and history. We can buy some our local presents for them. it's kind of different. Every moment you see the presents. you would remid of these days in Shanghai. Last but no least, there are many interesting places in Shanghai. Such as People Square, Shanghai Museum, Oreeu TV Tower and so on. But in my opinion, Yu-garden is different of them. And I also have contidence in it. my foreign friends will love it, they'll have the most wonderful trip in Shanghai, they'll love my hometown.
