作者使用词汇表达不够灵活,需要多使用一些高级词汇;使用了简单的从句;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
I'm so happy now.First,I want to read some different kinds of books in the bookstore.Because it can opean my eyes.Second,I will watch TV to relax.Because I stayed up late so that I have a bad mood. Third,I'd like to play basketball .Because it can keep me healthy. What about you ?Please write to me. Best wishes to you!
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