文中词汇表达多样性不足,在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累;使用了简单的从句;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
I'm so happy now. First,I want to read some different kinds of books in the bookstore. Because it can open my eyes.Second,I will watch TV to relax. Because I stayed up late so that I have a bad mood.Third,I'd like to play basketball. Because it can keep me healthy. What about you ?Please write to me. Best wishes to you!
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