三、自己的看法。
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。
Recently I’ve had an interview with some experts and college students about their opinions on job hunting. College students have different opinions. Some of them want to find a well-paid job while a few of them want to be self-employed/start their own business. However, the minority are not in a hurry to hunt jobs but wait for a better chance at home. Toward this point of view, some experts warn that it might be more difficult for those at home to find a satisfactory job next year. They advise graduates to find a regular job as quickly as possible so that they can earn some money to support themselves / earn a living ,and get much working experience, which will help to find a better career in the coming year. As we know, every year more and more college students graduate from school, the competition is getting a bit fierce. So in my opinion graduates should find a job as quickly as possible after graduation.