文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;多多加强从句和复杂句的使用。
My name is !!!,my day began like this .In everyday the 7:00,i'm get up.before the breakfast i have a read newspaper habit .After i eat breakfast ,When i eat over,i will cheek up my bag.Insdie English book,Chinese book,math book all in there.And began i could check up my pencil case,the rule, eraser, pen, pencil, and sharpener all in here too. But today is spacial ,because today we now go school,actually i’m going to school.just different from the past. a few day ,have school party. i can help them ,come to take picture.so today i just take photo in my bag .
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