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中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
The Mid-Autumn Festival is a traditional festival of Chinese at the mid of August of lunar calendar. It's a special day which the whole family get together to have a big dinner, and then enjoy the full moon, talk to each other who have long time no see, or watch the TV show just for the Festival. The day is a meanful day, the one who is far away with his or her family always makes a long call to make sure the members of the family is fine and give them a good willness. Mothers always make many delicious to wait her children and children's family, grandson or grand-daughter come back. It's really a warm and happniess day!