过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者句法基础较为扎实;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇,也能较准确地使用高级词汇。
With my years at university almost passing away, it occurs to me that I have to think about the question that " What I have learned from my years at university?".From my personal perspective, I acknowledge that I have learned not only professional knowledge but also some extracurricular knowledge which taught me how to be a person making contribution to society as well as our country. Majoring in English leads me to learning English very hard and concentrating in English teaching in order to become a respected English teacher in future. Moreover, my spoken English is drammatically improved by the means of taking part in Englsih corner included in my extracurricular activities. I also learn how to communicate with other college students and cooperate with my teammates to strive for the same goal in those activities. In conclusion, I have spent meaningful years at college and already made good preparation for society.