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中考考前作文集中训练附范文20:网上交友

发布时间:2014-05-29 18:00浏览次数:558
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网上交友有利也有弊。请以Is making friends online bad or good?为题写一篇80词左右的短文,谈 谈你对网上交友的看法。短文开头己给出,不计入总词数。


Is making friends online bad or good?
With the development of the Internet more and more people begin to enjoy making friends online.
 
用户的作文(系统评分64.0分
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文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰。

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Is making friends online bad or good? With the development of the Internet, more and more people begin to enjoy making friends online. It is true that making friends online helps us a lot because it can make us have more friends. The more friends we have, the more information we can get and the better we can know the world. What’s more, we can have more people to share our happiness and sadness. On the other hand, making friends online may bring us danger and trouble, too. There have been many people who are cheated online. So I think making friends online are helpful, but we must be careful.

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