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2012年1月12日雅思写作真题:设立图书馆的好处

发布时间:2013-08-06 16:49浏览次数:4578
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【题目要求

Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

【题目讲解

这回试题难不倒烤鸭。冲突的焦点落在[有必要设立图书馆]或[没有必要],而不是单一的立场library PK Internet。在家使用因特网的好处太多,可是利用图书馆可以补足其功能complementary。

两个问题。引言3 sentences之后,1. 讨论二者的利弊,看中体的承段6 sentences与转6 sentences段。2. 考生提出看法,看合段的结论3 sentences。

起段引言 Introduction

开头第一句。申论主题:使用因特网可以取得各种资讯Vs.图书馆对大众有利。

开头第二句。集中焦点:冲突是两难自解。

开头第三句。一分为二:分头指引讨论二者利弊。

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较丰富地使用高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

It is a heatedly discussed topic that if the government should establish libraries. Some people agree with it, while others are against this idea. They maintain people can acauire information from the Internet. In speaking of me, I am in favour of the first one. First of all, libraries can do us a favor to get in touch with others. For example, you can sit in the library, communicating with other people who share the same interest with you. However, if you use the Internet, you seldom meet interesting people, which may make your reading process boring. Furthermore, because of the library, you can seek for information almost at any time. As we all know, without electricity, we can't resort to the Internet to help us. Nevertheless, we can also read books or newspapers in the library. Last but not least, libraries can help to improve the development of culture. For instance, many important findings are found by archeologists all around the world. Culture can be protected in the form of books, but the statistics on the Internet is likely to miss. Above all, I think liberaries are important, and government should put more money on building libraries.

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